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:iconghostkillar:
You did a very good job with her, the color fits together great with the lines, very neat and clean. There is somethings that are beautiful but still need improving ^--^

- May I suggest to make her look more free? Maybe have her do a pose that shows her arms?
- Maybe you could move the ears up just a little bit, there kinda good there though I must admit
- Hmm, maybe just as a tip to make it POP a little more, you can trace over your lines using a (c) sharpie, I use to use them all the time and they make details POP a little more, you could also try to make it look like light is hitting her in a certain direction, ( maybe shading could help with that )

Hope I was fair >n<
Anyways, she is very cute! QuQ
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:iconberiberi-chuu:
Very fair :3 thanks :3 the advice helps alot
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:iconghostkillar:
=GhostKillar Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
thank you, I tried not to be harsh >u<
no problem sweet pea
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:iconberiberi-chuu:
Hehe you weren't harsh at all hunny
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:iconghostkillar:
=GhostKillar Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
ok good *sighs* your my little nee chan, I don't want to hurt you, I want to help you QuQ
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*MechanicMocha Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nee-chan is an older sister. Imouto is little sister,
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:iconghostkillar:
=GhostKillar Nov 7, 2012  Student General Artist
I know :3
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:iconberiberi-chuu:
Hehe you helped me a lot hunny
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:iconghostkillar:
=GhostKillar Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
yay, QuQ
Im glad
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